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         <% if alert %><p class="alert-message error"><%= alert %></p><% end %>
         <%= devise_error_messages! %>
         <h2>Why CakeSide?</h2>
-        <p>CakeSide is a community dedicated to giving cake artists, bakers, creators, hobbyists, and of course cake lovers a place to share ideas and creations as well as finding inspiration and exploring creativity. The resources shared on this site are all user driven.</p>
+        <p>CakeSide is a community dedicated to giving cake artists, bakers, creators, hobbyists, and of course cake lovers a place to share ideas and creations. Explore your creativity and find your inspiration. Resources shared here are all user driven.</p>
         <h2>About Us</h2>
-        <p>We're a passionate team dedicated to changing the cake community. Frustrated with the lack of a community for helpful cake resources and a place that inspires creativity and sharing for cake enthusiasts, CakeSide was born. We believe all features of this site should be user inspired. We love to listen so feel free to give us feedback. Check back often to see what's new in the CakeSide community!</p>
+        <p>We are a passionate team dedicated to improve the cake sharing experience. Frustrated with the lack of community that provides more than just photo sharing, CakeSide was born. All features of this site will be user inspired. We love to listen so feel free to give us feedback. Check back often to see what's new in the CakeSide community!</p>
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